Frenetic
Kinetic
This panic, magnetic.
It latches, attaches
Destroys the aesthetic.
I scratch til I bleed,
You feed off my need
Delicious disease
So ripe for release.
I mumble the words
Stumble with the herd
Chaotic, hypnotic
Regressing, disturbed.
Gouged
Aroused
Demons carouse
Stalking the fallen
Preparing shrouds.
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We are Stephen and Fionnuala and this is our story. We live in Northern Ireland, have been married for 17 years and have three kids - Adam, Hannah and Rebecca.
We hope that our story will inspire and encourage others. We have walked a rocky road yet here we are today, together and stronger than ever. We are far from perfect and our faith has been battered and bruised.
But an untested faith is a pointless faith. Just as a fractured faith is better than none at all.
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Wow. Dark and moving.
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Thank you 😊
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Dark and disturbing. I want to hug you!
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Thank you 😊
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wow.
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Dang, man.
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Care to expand on your feedback?
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Dang tootin’, man.
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Nope. I’ve still got nothing.
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I can’t reply in kind
For, my sore behind’s
Distracting
Impacting
My chances to rhyme.
I had no expression
No specific impression
To share, bear, or tear
As I care for Depression:
The artist’s repression.
This piece;
Its release –
‘Shrouded beast
No mind’s peace’
Made me wish that I can
With a swish of my hand
Plate a dish like Stephan (had to rhyme)
So I answered, ‘Daaaang, man.’
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I think you liked it. I think…..
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Yes. The expression is meant to convey awe. 🙂
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You’re really kind. I posted another one today.
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I saw. 🙂
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Can’t stop reading this
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That’s good. Cos it bumps my stats up 😂
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Oh good. That was why. 🤦♀️
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My Shroud has been prepared…
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Wow! This is very dark, but at the same time very expressive and moving…
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Thank you Carol. Sorry about the darkness. I’ve posted a Christian message today to make up for it.
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No need to apologize – I post a fair bit of darkness myself. It is beautiful, and after all that’s life isn’t it? Dark and light and all shades in between. May light cross your path today and stay a good long while. 🙂
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Love the staccato rhythm in your pietry. It really brings out the meaning of yoyr words.
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Love the rhymes!
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👍🏻
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Love this!
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