A little book update for you all this morning. For it is morning in not so sunny Northern Ireland. Regular readers will know that I forwarded the 6th draft of ‘The Kirkwood Scott Chronicles – Skelly’s Square’ to my editor, Laura, before Christmas. She had the audacity to take a break over the festive period (shocking, I know) but is now fully back in harness and furiously polishing the very rough manuscript that I have spent the last year toiling over.
In the meantime I haven’t been resting on my laurels. I’ve drafted a query letter for prospective literary agents in addition to a two page book synopsis. I’m quite chuffed with how well the synopsis reads but how tough is it to summarise a book into two pages. Sheesh! I’ve also ventured back into the murky world of Twitter to research/stalk prospective agents who I believe are a good fit for Kirkwood.
After looking at in excess of 500, I’ve drawn up a shortlist who I will be submitting my query letter, synopsis and sample pages to, once Laura has worked her magic. Then it’s a case of wait and see. I’m hoping an agent will pick up on it, but if not I will consider self-publishing if there is no interest. It’s a highly competitive market and there is no shame in venturing down the latter route.
So….what is ‘Skelly’s Square’ all about? I thought I’d tantalise your taste buds a little. So here’s a snippet of the synopsis:
Many books have been written about the Battle of Waterloo. Some painstakingly researched by learned historians, others penned by those who were there and survived the horrors to tell the tale. Yet, despite the millions of words, there still remains an element of mystery as to what happened amidst the mud and the smoke. There are grey areas. Some stories have never been told. This is one such story. The story of a company of men, who fought and died as one, but whose valour and courage never saw the light of day. This is the story of ‘Skelly’s Square,’ the ‘Forgotten Regiment.’ For they have returned.
Modern day Belfast, Northern Ireland. Meet Kirkwood Scott. He’s having a bad day, no make that life. He’s stuck in a dead end job, his girlfriend has just dumped him and his family have emigrated to the other side of the world. Then there are the routines, the endless routines which haunt his every waking thought. Kirkwood has OCD, a mental disorder triggered in him as a young boy following the brutal murder of his father. A murder Kirkwood feels responsible for.
Responsibility brings consequences. Ever since that day, Kirkwood has paid the price via a series of tortuous routines, ‘The 49,’ which he must perform. Failure to do can lead to all sorts of bad stuff happening. Planes crash, tower blocks collapse. And it’s all his fault. Why? Because Skelly says so. Kirkwood believes it to be nothing more than an imaginary voice, created as a child when he innocently played with his toy soldiers. But we know better, don’t we? Skelly has returned to wreak his revenge on an ungrateful world which turned its back on him.
Kirkwood is resigned to a life of quiet torment until he meets a mysterious young homeless woman, Meredith Starc. Meredith has her own problems. Traumatised by the suicide of her best friend, Emily O’Hara, indifferent parents, and callous school bullies she flees her privileged upbringing to the streets of Belfast where she survives on her wits, only interested in where the next bottle of wine is coming from. Then there’s the graffiti where Emily appears to be communicating to her from beyond the grave. Not to mention the blood drenched dreams where she is pursued by a figure very familiar to Kirkwood.
Kirkwood and Meredith join forces, slowly gaining each other’s trust and discovering that beneath the gritty reality of Belfast’s streets, a brutal battle rages between supernatural forces of good and evil, with the future of the planet at stake. Guided by a kindly tramp, Cornelius Dobson, who is not all he seems and a wheelchair bound teenager, Harley Davison, they realise they hold the key to saving mankind from a new Dark Age. But can they survive long enough to figure it out, as Skelly unleashes his army of ghost soldiers on an unsuspecting city to hunt them down?
The above is only a snippet of the story and the KSC universe. But I’d be grateful for any feedback. Feel free to comment below.
I cannot promise to have much ‘constructive’ feedback, but from that summary it actually sounds really good. Read it to my partner who was big into fantasy as a teen and she said it sounds extremely interesting. We’d both read it for sure!
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Thank you. I hope you both do.
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Good luck with it all!
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Thank you Joanne 🙂
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WOW! You have quite a story. Cannot wait to read more. Deep and Dark. Good and Evil and how sometimes the uncomfortable can force us to grow. Prayers that you will see it published and many can read about Kirkwood and Meredith and their friends
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Thank you Loretta. The prayers are appreciated 🙏🏻
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Great stuff Steven! Can’t wait to read the entire book! I am praying that the rest of the process goes quickly and well.
Blessings,
Chuck
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Thank you Chuck. It’s very frustrating I can’t share more. I’d love to click my fingers and publish it tomorrow.
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Sounds amazing! I can’t wait to read the whole thing!
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Thank you Leigh 🙂
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Sounds great. Would love to read.
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Thank you. I hope you get to soon.
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Thank you. I hope you get to do so soon.
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Synopsis are torturous. You obviously put yourself through a lot of torture bc it’s written well, sounds intriguing, and makes sense.
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Oh you’re very kind. Thank you. That’s made my day 😊
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Intriguing! As a big fan of fantasy, I would definitely read it. The synopsis is nicely done, IMHO.
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Thank you very much. That’s great to hear.
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Awesome! This sounds like something I would be interested in reading.
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Thank you. That’s a big compliment 🙂
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You’re welcome.
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I can’t wait to read the book!! Well done!!
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Thank you as ever.
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I have read a fair few fantasy novels and this is one I’d definitely like to get my hands on – in part because of the setting – my grandfather hailed from Ireland. On the other hand, ancestry aside, I am interested because it looks to be a great read. Wishing you complete success in your endeavors.
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Yes, Belfast is the real star of the book. Thank you very much.
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I am rooting for ya …
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I wanna read this!!!! It sounds fascinating. 🙂
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I want you to read it as well 🙂
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😊😊
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It IS brilliant. It’s original and beautifully written and I’d love a signed copy!
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Which you will of course receive, my faithful beta reader 🙂
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Whoop! Whoop! 😊
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From the small tease/snippet, it all sounds really interesting. Although not my preferred genre, I’ll be excited to read it all the same.
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I really appreciate you would still read it even though it’s not your cup of tea.
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Knowing you’ve put your heart and soul, not mention blood, sweat and tears into the KSC, makes it an easy decision.
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Thank you. I feel like Groundhog Day having this conversation with you again but I just wanted to provide a little update to everyone.
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I seriously, ‘seriously’, canNOT wait! 😃
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You’re really kind. I wish I could send you a copy now 🙂
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If only I was a professional trade reviewer! But considering I’m not :), let’s wait until this wonderful book is out and kicking sales right out the gate! Then I’ll purchase my copy and say adios to the world until I’m done reading! 🙂
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Thank you. It’s a big book so you might need to hide away for quite some time 🙂
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I’ll be happy to 🙂
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That’s good to hear. Thank you 😊
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Although I’m typically don’t read fantasy novels, your book sounds like one worthy of an exception!😊 Congratulations on all the progress you’ve made so far!
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Thank you very much 🙂
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I’m a fairly recent subscriber and I find I am always taking the time to read your posts when they appear in my inbox.
I love that you are sharing all of the stories of your life – the book creation & publishing, your family, your running, your other challenges – as they happen. I also love the ‘slice of Dublin life’ feeling and impressions I get from much of your writing. Thank you for sharing yourself – and I look forward to reading your book however it happens to be published.
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Thank you very much Mary. That’s kind of you to say.
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Oops, I think I meant to say Belfast
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Wow. Pretty compelling. It drew me in.
Praying for you and your book. God loves you!
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Thank you very much Gail 🙏🏻
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🙂
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This sounds very interesting and I can’t wait to read the whole thing. Tell your agent they better sell it in America or there will be hell to pay LOL!
I only have one minor critique. I’m not getting how the first paragraph of your summary, the part about Waterloo, ties into the modern story. It feels like it’s a separate story line there.
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Thank you. It all makes sense in the book.
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So make sure it sells in the USA.
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Get praying 🙏🏻 was
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I will
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It’s been awhile since i had seen your posts so I went looking today. Congratulations on the book progress! The snippet is intriguing.
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Thank you very much 😊
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Wow! That’s packed full of good stuff right there! I can’t wait to read it!
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Thank you Lacey. How are you and your family keeping?
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We are doing well! Tomorrow is my husbands last day on his submarine before he moves on to “shore duty.” (Which means he will never deploy again!) big changes about to happen in our house! Thank you for asking!
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That’s great news 😊
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Great synopsis.
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Thank you. My book is out now 👍🏻
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